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So beautiful in white

Updated: Dec 30, 2022

City lights, a burning fight Stars unseen, a young night Her eyes empty, her lungs full; But she was doing alright Her mind, her streets, She was wandering free

Cold, but alone,

Seeking some company

And he looked so beautiful in white

Gave her what she wanted, every night They say beautiful things were deadly, And so was he burning as she cried.

She was strong, but she lost,

She took her last breath and she coughed

He looked so beautiful in white; she thought But he was so deadly he killed a lot.


---------------- I wrote this poem when I was 16 and cigarettes were popular. Now I'm 22 years old and vapes have taken over. Despite the colors, the smoke is still white.


This poem brings awareness to smoking and its detrimental effects on your body; Please stop smoking before it's too late.



(image from wix)

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